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Free your mind of all your thoughts
And forget what you have not
Gouge your eyes of what you believe
And let go of what you've sought

Throw down the beast of misconception
Throw down your wiry ways
Let yourself be your guide
When you are lost within this maze

It is your thoughts, within the thoughts
For this is what you lack
It is fear that brings you down
And your thoughts that hold you back

For you to liberate
For you to just see
What you have now learned
You have learned that you are free...
Be free...
This was one of the first poems I wrote, back in third grade.

©1989-2008 by Sean Murphy, All Rights Reserved
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Third grade? Wow.

This reminds me of how we tend to imprison ourselves. Sometimes it seems like we're our own worst enemy, doesn't it?

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cypher-neo Sep 29, 2008  Professional Photographer
It certainly does sometimes. :nod:
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:iconterrorcookie:
Here's to liberation! :highfive:
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synconi Sep 27, 2008   Artisan Crafter
The imagery is wonderful, and the message too. We all need to be liberated, I think.

I can't write like that, even now, let alone in third grade! :faint:
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cypher-neo Sep 28, 2008  Professional Photographer
Thanks. Glad you liked it! :hug:
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synconi Dec 2, 2008   Artisan Crafter
You're welcome! :aww:
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Saracat Oct 4, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
wow. very nice.

i never used words like misconception in the third grade. i am impressed.
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lovely....I like it=)
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cypher-neo Oct 4, 2004  Professional Photographer
TY.
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