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Whenever it rains she makes note of an idea
While the world spins a bit slower in Medea

She is ready to try something new
This is hardly surprising though impromptu

There is a scent of gunpowder in the air
Going on like this will kill you, I'm aware

And yet it's these like days
That I like my mayonnaise
I have dared so many people over the past 5 years to write poetry that ends in mayonnaise. Only one person has ever taken me up on my challenge, *crazynloveless
On this note, since my bluff was called, I believe it's appropriate for me to submit my "mayonnaise" poem.
RULES FOR THE MAYO POETRY CHALLENGE
:bulletblue: Must be more than one paragraph or verse
:bulletblue: The last word of the last verse of the poem must be "mayonnaise"
:bulletblue: Don't write crap! Even if they don't necessarily make sense together, each line of the poem must form a complete thought.
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softcell72 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2006
:laughing: very cool idea
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cypher-neo Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2006  Professional Photographer
Poets have been very quiet on the subject of mayonnaise... 'Bout time to breach the subject, I decided.
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crazynloveless Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2004
Cool cool. :) Neato... Lived up to your own lil dare.
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cypher-neo Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2004  Professional Photographer
I have to... Someone else did.
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crazynloveless Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2004
Haha. Yep... I did. xP
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madelief Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2004
I think this is a very good Mayonnaise poem ^_^
I'm not much of a poet, but I like the rythm, and actually that last sentence makes me smile ^_^
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cypher-neo Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2004  Professional Photographer
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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